Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show don't Tell

WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like. +++++
--=trI will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

REMEMBER TO
·                     Write in the third person
·                     Use capital letters and full stops.

His amse were shivering like an life.
dogs were barking.
His body was shaking like a leaf.
he was quivering like an His mouth was like an
his hands were quivering like a fast car.
he could move her lips.

can you find out what emotions I'm writing about.